Whole bunch of small adjustments.
Possibly only obvious change is how I'm trying harder to establish Kirk's NASA background at the start with him talking a bit about Apollo 17. Followed by a more visually fleshed-out pitch for NASA's efforts helping people on Earth with a photo montage.
That all happens in first 2 minutes.
One big piece of feedback I've gotten is that Kirk's explanation of how "Wigner didn't like solid fuel" is used 2x. That is a really useful piece of feedback, as noticing duplicated moments is harder after you've watched a sequence 100x. And p01 is getting closed to done so I should have caught it. I have not fixed that yet here, is on my to-do list.
Feedback continues to be welcome.
I need to give myself some time away from p01 so I can watch it fresher. Am now starting to cleanup p02. I'll be sharing fresh iterations of that with you soon, although watching a rough edit of p02 after an almost-done p01 is a big nosedive in quality.
...p01 being just-a-chapter is also why you see people in the end credits who do not appear in the video. Those are opening credits, not closing credits.
2016-02-21 UPDATE
Thanks to another chunk of support, I'm now in the process of updating my "cache" drives from 4TB (desktop) to 8TB NAS. This has nothing to do with stability or security... they're only cache files... I was literally running out of space.
Yes, 8TB of total cache space was not enough. PPro just loves to create cache files for audio. They are mandatory. My computer spends more time rendering audio than video... such is the mystery of PPro.
I just find this amusing in that I'd never have thought when I was a kid I'd be buying 8TB drives. And today I need them not to store data, but simply to cache it.
Thanks for all the p01 feedback. Some has been coming back public some is private but all is appreciated.
Have started cleaning up content beyond p01. Looking at it with fresh eyes, some of it works but it is all tied up in a narrative that's not nearly engaging enough. I'm re-thinking the structure of later chapters.